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Tuesday 19 July 2011

God answered me!



WHO AM I?

Sudden rise of doubt;
Made me think a lot,
Blinked with worry...
“Who am I?” is my query.


Many resulted parry;
Some said sorry!
To make me merry;
Hurry! Hurry! Hurry!
Just answer my query..

My foes answered “wary”
& friends called me “fairy”
Mom gave me a peek;
Just named meek!
To overcome my fall;
Dad calls me doll!

Hark! Hark! Hark!
Am I really calm! Or a super storm!
Am I either handy!Or mere meaty!
Am I either chatty!Or wide witty!
Am I either weepy!Or extremely zany!

Now God is my seer,
Please make me clear…
You always come to justify;
Whatsoever you ratify;
My foremost doubt will nullify!
Your prise is peerless…

Now I am really fine!
With your lovely lines-
“Brain is to think;
Eyes are to blink;
Whenever you think,
I am ready with my link!
River is to flow;
& you are here to glow!
Sun is to shine;
You are always mine!”


written by- sowmya 
on 18th july2011 

24 comments:

  1. Hope now you know who you are....anyways..the poem is awesome so as pic which is quite relevant to poem.

    U have found that niche in you....keep writing :)

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  2. Hemant!
    my heartfelt thanks for helping me to find this picture!!
    the credit goes to you!!
    &
    thanks for ur comments ..

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  3. really nice poem...
    hope you get to know who you are..
    this is a question which every 1 asks himself one or the other day.. and gets the answer by his experience...
    some time it takes a long time.. but surely you will get to know..

    keep blogging..
    :D

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  4. Keep your thank in the bank....
    :)
    :)

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  5. That was awesome answer given by God....Glad you realized who are you...am still hunting for my answer....who I am?

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  6. you made me blush blush blush, such free flow of words... thats a true poetry, soft to read and to fell the essence.... awesome work

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  7. Hey sowmya....I like to rite prose in freetime but seriously this poem of your is awesome!!! m flabbergasted.!!!!
    keep writing...

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  8. hey valli its very simple to know about ourself..
    we are all childrens of god...so u come to know catagory so dont worry :)

    thanks for ur comments

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  9. bhargav,

    you too write well...
    thanks for dropping me ur views..

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  10. skywalker thanks for dropping from ur heart...

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  11. It's beautiful. Came to see your version of 'Who am I', which is beautiful beyond words!

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  12. Nice poem. :)
    Liked the last 4 lines a lot! :)

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  13. thanks saru & abhishek...for enjoying this stuff... & speaking from ur heart...

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  14. Splendid Words! Its a very beautiful and deep poem. Keep them coming :-)

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  15. welcome aakask
    thanks alot! for feeling the poem & dropping from ur heart :)

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  16. Nice peom and nice rhythm... keep writing..

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