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Saturday, 5 May 2012

Mock at Marriage



Bride, Groom are two scapegoat;
Who decides to sail in a boat;
Sailing community merrily shout;
With a farewell to halcyon, without doubt.

Couple allure for a secret sight;
Daring camera, video & focus light;
Drool in dreaming their night;
Being blank to future twist,turn & fight.

Kith & kin wishes with a bouquet in a queue;
Huddle by old gentlemen in tiptop shoe;
Teens loiter; still make friends more or few;
Kid's gambol makes a quaint view.

Flowers,festoons are mesmerizing to watch;
Bang of band with perfect rhythm it catch;
Enjoying delicious dinner in a batch;
Being King & Queen is just one day  match.


Looks like lovely pair in Nuptial  knot;
With a pose to final smiley snap shot;
Smile extends, if both sacrifice a lot;
& tends to give more than what they got!




Written by: Sowmya 
On 4th May 2012.







27 comments:

  1. Lovely description of a wedding in a sweet verse Sowmya!

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    1. welcome rahul,:)
      thanks for admiring my mock :)

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    1. welcome homemaker,
      thanks for visiting & giving ur words :)

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  3. :)... what you want me to comment...

    the last phrase ....louds it all... nice one..

    was just blushing .... may all feel the essence..

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    1. Welcome bhargav,:)

      this is peak of happiness when the essence of the words felt :) thank you! :)

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  4. good to see you try different topics...keep it up!

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    1. welcome ashok :)
      thanks for enjoying my trial in different topics :)

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    1. welcome valli,:)

      thanks you! keep smiling always :)

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  6. Wow!!!!! Sowmya..a good read, and as usual u capture the marrige in the form of poem....as usual, ur strength of carving a poem out of anything and everything...

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    1. welcome hemant :)

      thanks for making me as poetic sculpture though i am not :P :D
      keep smiling always :)

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  7. hahahaha..scapegoats..i guess after marriage, only the boy remains a goat :P

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    1. :D welcome muhammad,

      seems well experienced :D :P ya true guys remain goats where as gals already offered know! :D

      thanks for ur visit & sardonic writing :)

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  8. I was surprised that u didnt know I attempt poetry :)
    check out
    http://ashokisms.wordpress.com/

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    1. hey ashok,
      thank you for sharing!
      will follow it from today,
      i never knew you are good in poetry too!
      every poems are really good!

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  9. Looks like lovely pair in Nuptial knot;
    With a pose to final smiley snap shot;
    Smile extends, if both sacrifice a lot;
    & tends to give more than what they got!

    so true...
    Liked the whole poem! :)

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    1. welcome shesha! :)

      thanks for accepting my thoughts :)

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  10. Once again a lovely poem with simple and beautiful words. A nice description as well a beautiful message.. Well done Sowmya..
    :-)

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    1. welcome pranab! :)
      thanks a lot for ur visit & comments!

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  11. Sacrifice is the closet synonym to marriage. A very well written poem.

    www.sarusinghal.com

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    1. welcome saru :)

      yes! thanks for ur words!:)

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  12. Wow..brilliantly put up!
    But what about the quiet marriages..where all that matters is the love in the eye of the other :)

    Take Care

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    1. welcome fatima!:)
      your words made me think .....thanks!
      but whatever the marriage be the point i have mentioned it i think so! :)
      well how many love marriages are successful?

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