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Tuesday, 10 April 2012

chain of lies



One, two, three, four, five,
How far one can lie!
gruff! gruff! oh lies!
Is it a journey till one die;
Or a jostle to survive?
still truth peek through eye.


with jitters initially one try;
either tiny or huge but,why?
By gifting a bile whom rely;
Recoil for the true hue & cry;
Inner voice  grope "aren't you shy?".


Reason may be countless as sky;
 Niggle for being deceitful very high;
To hamper gruesome & dry;
Better to say "hey lie,good bye"
Then truth will flirt with our eye!

written by :Sowmya.
on 9th April 2012.





28 comments:

  1. Whoa !!
    Sorry for being so away from blogsphere and look when I was planning for a topic and wandered here, I got your this poem.. again with that simplicity you expressed a whole biography. Loved the true lines beautifully written
    "with jitters initially one try;
    either tiny or huge but,why?"

    Lovely.. keep writing while smiling (and make us smile) :-)

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    1. welcome pranab! :)
      happy to see ur words in my blog!
      its all due to ur encouragement;
      my poetry journey have stood so far!
      keep visiting & smiling always :)

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  2. good to see you back after a long gap...well written as usual Sowmya...

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    1. welcome ashok! :)

      even i felt happy to see ur comments asusual :)
      keep smiling :)

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  3. Sowmya, A very nice and sweet poem! Why lie:):)

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    1. welcome rahul,:)
      ya when i was searching for the topic to write after long gap;sudden strike of this lie, coz none in this world might escaped form that lie; though not after maturity during schooling every one might have told a tiny lie :) even i have told & felt guilt of it during my school days :)
      so this made me to write about lie :)
      thanks for ur words!,keep smiling always!:)

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  4. you have a very unique brush to paint the colors..

    may it be red, blue or yellow and each frame gets such a nice expression with the simplicity you take us on journey of your awesome work...

    truely adorable, thoughtful.. so depth ... loved it to the core..

    at times even we do not wish we lie... wonder why??? may be the life of all of us has become so complicated that to maintain relations we go for that ugly ride.. brilliant...

    kp writing... it blooms your soul then.. :)

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    1. welcome bargav, :)

      finally ur footsteps replenished my comment column & happiness :) thanks a lot for good, motivational words! with urge me to write more :)
      thanks once again! keep smiling always :)

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  5. Nice poem and a wonderful blog design :)

    Regards
    village girl

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    1. welcome & thanks roopZ! keep smiling always :)

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    1. welcome prashant :)
      very true the real one can understand the truth in one's eye :) thanks for ur words!

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  7. Ah, I am so happy to be here.. two reasons.. lovely poem and rhyming too..I love the line."Better to say ,hey lie , goodbye.. ",

    I have some thing to say about lie here:

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2010/04/telling-lie.html

    I will be visiting this space often.. and thanks for all the wonderful comments..

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    1. welcome ramesh sood :)

      thanks for visiting my smiling world :) its my pleasure to hear some comments from wonderful poet like u! :)

      keep smiling always :)

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  8. We should not lie and this sweet poem urges us to follow the path of goodness.

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    1. welcome saru! :)
      if my thought urge u! then that's my greatness saru! thanks a lot for ur words :)

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  9. This is lovely poem Sowmya....you did splendid job on rhyming.....

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    1. welcome valli,:)
      thanks a lot! happy for ur words! :)

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  10. Firstly, i am amazed by the perfect rhyming scheme! KUDOS for that! :)
    and yes, sometimes i wonder if this tryst with lies would ever end. a wonderful poem! :)

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    1. welcome kirti :)
      thanks for ur beautiful words!:)

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  11. Gud One Sowmya.... Keep writing :)
    Inner voice grope "aren't you shy?".
    Reason may be countless as sky;

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    1. welcome lyd,
      thanks for ur encouraging words & visit! keep smiling always :)

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  12. So Ms. Sowmya is back with a bang....you belong to a different league altogether....your skill to write on any topic makes u stand out of the crowd...

    keep writing more frequently..we missed u :)

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    1. welcome hemant :)

      hey don't say such huge words!thanks for ur visit & admiring my poem & giving some encouraging words! :) keep smiling always :)

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  13. but if there were no lies in the world, how could we have this beautiful poem then? :)

    and when i started reading this, it reminded me of a song by alisha...ek do teen char, i love you money money .... :)

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  14. welcome muhammad :)

    well nice to know ur flashback :P thanks for ur words!

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