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Monday, 15 August 2011

Noble & Free Nature!

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 23; the twenty-third edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for this month is FREE.


Noble & Free Nature!


Like a cluster inside a pillow;
Sun's smile turn you yellow;
Rainbow ascend with mellow;
O cloud! blissful blue fellow.

It's God's pleasure to set you free;
In my leisure,like to watch you under a tree;
you are my treasure to set my mind free!

Never get caught in any hand;
In desert you play with sand;
Blow as if you are blind;
O wind! gentle & kind.

It's God's pleasure to set you free;
In my leisure,like to watch you under a tree;
you are my treasure to set my mind free!

Preserve pearls with passion;
Snore without slumber shows thy version;
Billow on bay is beckon of fashion;
O ocean! beauty of my nation.

It's God's pleasure to set you free;
In my leisure,like to watch you under a tree;
you are my treasure to set my mind free!


written by sowmya
on august 15th,2011 
note:acend-climb;mellow-with soft color & merry;slumber-sleep;version-differ from others;billow-great waves
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31 comments:

  1. Sowmya,

    Welcome to Blog-a-Ton. I have a special love for poems (metaphor).

    "It's God's pleasure to set you free;
    In my leisure,like to watch you under a tree;
    you are my treasure to set my mind free!"

    No words.. Rock on Sowmya.. Good luck for Blog-a-Ton. Free... are we?

    Someone is Special

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  2. Ultimate, awesome, beautiful, amazing.....

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  3. sweet rhyme!! :)

    my entry for BAT 23---
    FREE

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  4. hehe dis is like 3d effect wid d theme n d poem n evrythin seems all rhythmic n floatin in space.
    so cute! :D

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  5. thanks someone is special :)i am glad that u adore poems :)

    thanks you hemant for many wonderful words :)

    thanks pri & aativas
    for ur smile from ur heart :) keep smiling always

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  6. thank you sadiya for feeling my post as 3d effect & dropping from ur heart! :D

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  7. Beautiful Sowmya and it's very apt for the theme. Love the rhyming!

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  8. Nice poem. You managed the ryhme and refrain pretty well. Best of luck for the Blog-a-ton. You can find my entry here In search of freedom

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  9. wow owesome... gr8 rhyme!! i loved it :)

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  10. awesome... great rhymes...

    ATB for BAT

    Do check out my entry at Free? To do what exactly?

    Regards
    Wandering Thoughts

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  11. Ahw...what a beautiful poem on nature..:)
    NIce job

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  12. Never get caught in any hand;
    In desert you play with sand;
    Blow as if you are blind;
    O wind! gentle & kind

    thats lovely

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  13. One of the best poems I read so far filled in BAT for the topic - free.. Good luck for BAT..

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  14. Nice poem Sowmya, and the background animation provides altogether a very different feel to it.

    Good luck for BAT :)
    You can read my entry here...
    What being Free meant for her

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  15. Great poem-pure thoughts, lucid expression.
    But even more, i like the way you have encompassed a range of emotions by keeping your expression open-ended, rather than confining yourself to a more definite object.
    ATB for BATOM.

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  16. thanks for ur comment there sowmya...but thats not wht i wrote for bat.....its something i wrote for myself....anyway cheers....u too keep writitng and keep smiling:)

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  17. lovely lines...beautifully crafted words!

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  18. Hope our thoughts and action are as free as wind ...

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  19. thanks for your support saru :)

    thanks fool :P why did u name like that when there are many wonderful names :)

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  20. thanks & welcome
    niya :) glad that u loved it :)

    thanks & welcome "some unspoken words" :)

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  21. thanks & welcome... sunil happy for such a great motivational words :)

    thanks & welcome Animesh Ganguly
    glad that you enjoyed my blog :)

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  22. thanks & welcome "the critics " :)

    thanks & welcome Brijender Singh- happy that you enjoyed the deep feel of thoughts :)

    thanks & welcome kalyan :)

    thanks & welcome ketan :) thats very true thoughts are like wind fast & fabulous :)

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  23. A beautiful poem indeed. In short you have given a phenomenal post!
    Midas Touch for BAT!

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  24. Your poems are always way too amazing. I really love the way you put up the rhyme. Beautiful once again :-)

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  25. welcome cherry blossom! thanks :)

    thanks Aakash for enjoying that much! :)

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  26. hey so nice.....ur poem ..the blog theme...so perfect....

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  27. Sowmya - I liked your poem, it has a nice flow and the mood is built just right.Will surely come back to read some more.


    BTW I know this template must ve been quite dear to you - but for a sheer reading pleasure, if you could have a lighter background that could better suit the eye.

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  28. hearty welcome!

    sourab rao & thank you! :)

    Gyanban thanks for ur suggestion for lighter background i have to search for another template;let me try :)

    chintan thank u:)

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