In Search Of Paradise
I was missed in the dark dense forest;
Insuperable with my lost way,
with a stage of deadline;
I prevailed to propitiate those path,
Holding faith as my deification;
Faced the role of rigmarole,
Just like a sleepwalk;
Just like a sleepwalk;
on a slippery slope,
I felt blind on the entire hope!
At a fluttering movement against foe;
I wandered with a wanderlust;
I wandered with a wanderlust;
& exhaled with an exhaust.
Thereby wished for a fairy-God-Mother;
To get rid-off my woes;Meanwhile,
A sweet voice fascinated me;
& made me woke up;
From falter & fanciful moment,
That familiar fetching voice; called me again!
I felt the true paradise....
When i saw my lovely mom;
With smile she uttered;
"Good morning Dear! "
written by : sowmya
written on:4th June, 2011
NOTE: insuperable- impossible to overcome;rigmarole-long complicated process;wanderlust-strong desire to travel;falter-lose strength;fanciful-imaginary;deification-treat as god.
Wow !!!
ReplyDeleteu have done it again... it made me smile when i saw the last stanza... sweet and touchy... keep it up dear !! :-)
Hey this one is really a gr8 piece of art....i have read it third time by now..keep up the same passion :)
ReplyDeletea happy thanks!!! for reading it thrice ...
ReplyDeletehilarious at last!! ha ha ha
ReplyDeletekeep writing
thanks dear! for viewing my piece!
DeleteBeautiful ending to a wonderful verse from the heart:)
ReplyDeletethank you friends... for being my memorable part!!
ReplyDeleteOh my, that was indeed a nightmare.. Good ending to it though :) My mother waking me up after one definitely would cheer me too. Cheers!
ReplyDeletethanks leo!! for enjoying it & dropping your views from ur heart !!
ReplyDeleteI will not tell so much beautiful words like others :)....But i can't suppress it... Wonderful..wonderful :)..Meanwhile .. who is that foe? :)
ReplyDeleteWelcome Akhil! :)
Deleteit was a bad dream; i just remember that horror effect that's it,dont remember who was it :)
thanks for your wonderful effects :)
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