Bride, Groom are two scapegoat;
Who decides to sail in a boat;
Sailing community merrily shout;
With a farewell to halcyon, without doubt.
Couple allure for a secret sight;
Daring camera, video & focus light;
Drool in dreaming their night;
Being blank to future twist,turn & fight.
Kith & kin wishes with a bouquet in a queue;
Huddle by old gentlemen in tiptop shoe;
Teens loiter; still make friends more or few;
Kid's gambol makes a quaint view.
Flowers,festoons are mesmerizing to watch;
Bang of band with perfect rhythm it catch;
Enjoying delicious dinner in a batch;
Being King & Queen is just one day match.
Looks like lovely pair in Nuptial knot;
With a pose to final smiley snap shot;
Smile extends, if both sacrifice a lot;
& tends to give more than what they got!
Written by: Sowmya
On 4th May 2012.
Flowers,festoons are mesmerizing to watch;
Bang of band with perfect rhythm it catch;
Enjoying delicious dinner in a batch;
Being King & Queen is just one day match.
Looks like lovely pair in Nuptial knot;
With a pose to final smiley snap shot;
Smile extends, if both sacrifice a lot;
& tends to give more than what they got!
Written by: Sowmya
On 4th May 2012.
Lovely description of a wedding in a sweet verse Sowmya!
ReplyDeletewelcome rahul,:)
Deletethanks for admiring my mock :)
Beautiful lines..:-)
ReplyDeletewelcome homemaker,
Deletethanks for visiting & giving ur words :)
:)... what you want me to comment...
ReplyDeletethe last phrase ....louds it all... nice one..
was just blushing .... may all feel the essence..
Welcome bhargav,:)
Deletethis is peak of happiness when the essence of the words felt :) thank you! :)
good to see you try different topics...keep it up!
ReplyDeletewelcome ashok :)
Deletethanks for enjoying my trial in different topics :)
Beautiful poem on marriage Sowmya :)
ReplyDeletewelcome valli,:)
Deletethanks you! keep smiling always :)
Wow!!!!! Sowmya..a good read, and as usual u capture the marrige in the form of poem....as usual, ur strength of carving a poem out of anything and everything...
ReplyDeletewelcome hemant :)
Deletethanks for making me as poetic sculpture though i am not :P :D
keep smiling always :)
hahahaha..scapegoats..i guess after marriage, only the boy remains a goat :P
ReplyDelete:D welcome muhammad,
Deleteseems well experienced :D :P ya true guys remain goats where as gals already offered know! :D
thanks for ur visit & sardonic writing :)
I was surprised that u didnt know I attempt poetry :)
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hey ashok,
Deletethank you for sharing!
will follow it from today,
i never knew you are good in poetry too!
every poems are really good!
Thanks :)
DeleteLooks like lovely pair in Nuptial knot;
ReplyDeleteWith a pose to final smiley snap shot;
Smile extends, if both sacrifice a lot;
& tends to give more than what they got!
so true...
Liked the whole poem! :)
welcome shesha! :)
Deletethanks for accepting my thoughts :)
Once again a lovely poem with simple and beautiful words. A nice description as well a beautiful message.. Well done Sowmya..
ReplyDelete:-)
welcome pranab! :)
Deletethanks a lot for ur visit & comments!
Sacrifice is the closet synonym to marriage. A very well written poem.
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welcome saru :)
Deleteyes! thanks for ur words!:)
Wow..brilliantly put up!
ReplyDeleteBut what about the quiet marriages..where all that matters is the love in the eye of the other :)
Take Care
welcome fatima!:)
Deleteyour words made me think .....thanks!
but whatever the marriage be the point i have mentioned it i think so! :)
well how many love marriages are successful?
Well written indeed :)
ReplyDeletewelcome manoj :)
ReplyDeletethank you!