HELLO LITTLE HEART!
Welcome to the earth;
You are luckily blessed...
With,
A lovely mom & dad;
But never forget the one;
Who has sent you here!
Father of all fathers;
Mother of all mothers;
The only supreme power;
Just waiting for you,
To hold on your hands...Forever!
Earth is a place; which is full of race,
You are here to face;
The race of your taste;
Though you work hard;
Luck plays some part;
You will feel safe;
With your spiritual taste!
Situation may rise;
With some sweeter taste;
And not bitter always…
Envisage your stage;
Get away from your cage;
To know the truth of life on a certain age...
WRITTEN BY: Sowmya
Written on :13th may,2011.
great yar its awesome u r 2 good in this...............kp wrtng
ReplyDeletethanks deepu..
ReplyDeletesuperb....I like the last 2 lines :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, you've explained life very well in this poem.
ReplyDeletewelcome! rajaa.. thanks for enjoying! :)
ReplyDeletewelcome !Aakash ..glad that you grasped its in depth meaning!
Sowmya! Thanks for sending me this link! You have written so well that I read and read again!!!Last line is the reality of life and you kept it for the end. If you like you may follow my link through your dashboard . I will see if I can create a followers link in my blog as suggested by you. Thank you again!
ReplyDeletewelcome & thanks mr.rahul for enjoying my thoughts! :)
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