PRECIOUS GIFT:
I want you to give me a gift!
I want you to give me a gift!
Neither a gift of flowers;
Nor a wealthy showers.
Neither a gift of your time;
Nor a gift of a sloppy rain,
Neither a gift of shelter;
Nor a gift of flatters,
Neither a gift of care;
Nor a gift of any share,
No its not a gift of pride;
I just want to keep all these thing aside,
But still expect something from your side.
Hey dear honey! it doesn't need any money,
It gives a feel of sunny......
It makes me feel special,
Which blooms my soul forever;
Which never let me with tears..
Yes it has some healing power;
Truly;its a gift of peaceBut
everyone miss to seize...
Its an apt time to reveal;
Now eagerly waiting to see
Your wonderful gift of smile...
Its gives meaning more than wide;
But don't ever miss to give me;
A gift of your beautiful SMILE...
WRITTEN BY:Sowmya.
WRITTEN ON:21st jan,2011
lovely! here is my smile for u :)
ReplyDeleteAwww, this is so sweet :)
ReplyDeleteperfect rhyming again...wow... nice read and nice flow of emotions
ReplyDeleteBeautiful rhyming, and a nice way to express the value and beauty of a smile! :)
ReplyDeletehey saru thanks for giving me the gift of smile :)
ReplyDeletethanks bhargav for -ur motivational comments!! :)
ReplyDeletethanks leo for- admiring my poem & gave me "smile"
:)
Simple lines with wonderful rhythm and rhyme and sure you made someone special smile with that one for sure
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thanks for dropping your views farila... :)
ReplyDeletethis "smile " is my foremost desire i can say!! & you will not believe it!!
if i say that this poem i wrote for those who are serious with out smile ...
& there is no specific person behind this poem...keep smiling always :)
:)...my gift for u..:)
ReplyDeletethank u for this priceless gift; nirvaan :)
ReplyDeletekeep smiling always
Beautiful written, Sowmya ... :-)
ReplyDeletethanks :)
ReplyDeleteI do not even know how I ended up here, but I thought this post was great. I do not know who you are but definitely you are going to a famous blogger if you are not already ;) Cheers!
ReplyDelete:) welcome Nameless guest!
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by with your smile!