My lovely beauty queen,
I still remember the scene;
Your scamper with shy was keen;
That made golden days of teen,
Just flew away in steam…
Would like to steal our past…
Our love is boundless in cost;
Though our scintillating sentiments are vast;
Whim to relocate & gather it fast!
From the moment we started our life;
You are my laudable wife!
When I want you to hug & kiss;
I adore your shy towards grandson’s quiz.
Our maneuver in life is as gusto as cricket;
Now reached an eventual age to get our ticket;
Its almighty’s choice to choose our wicket;
Either you or I
must eschew mournful look with our locket.
I may be deaf! When you scream;
My shivering writing may not quash a ream
Yet my heart is younger to extreme;
You are the lady of my dream…
After ups & downs of tears;
Dear! Glad to see you cheer!
Now we have nothing to fear;
Come near! Come near!
I love you... Always dear!
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wonderful lines...so the grandma should be a special grandma :)
ReplyDeletei have written this already and will write it again, you have the gift to write about anything in prose.....awesome fabulous.. :)
ReplyDeleteAwww, this is so beautiful...Each paragraph stands out!
ReplyDeletewelcome raja! thanks of course grandmas are very special always :)
ReplyDeletewelcome & thank you skywalker :) all the best for ur trial.
welcome & thanks saru :)
Inspiring!! it made me feel how special grandma's and grandpa's are! You nailed it!
ReplyDeletewelcome manoj! & thanks for ur words!
ReplyDeletevery true...after full of sacrifice finally they get time to relax & interact each other! this is life :)
Beautiful words, especially the last paragraph is quite touchy.
ReplyDeletethank you Aakash! for feeling the content! :)
ReplyDeletesuch a beautiful poem. truly true love
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ReplyDeletewelcome sujatha! & thanks but i didnt get ur second comment "verification"! ? where?
ReplyDeleteBeautiful written.....keep writing....all the best
ReplyDeleteSanjay bhaskar
आदत….मुस्कुराने की
http://sanjaybhaskar.blogspot.com
this is beautiful
ReplyDeleteThis is truely awesome Sowmya....i wonder how you transitioned the emotions of an old man into a poem.....awesome work...I too wrote something like this sometime ago....
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welcome & thanks sanjay :)
ReplyDeletewelcome & thanks magiceye :)
welcome hemant :) after long time!
ReplyDeletethanks for ur words!
ya i read ur too its really touchy! :)
thanks for the link anyways
Very thoughtful and touching one!
ReplyDeletewelcome Rahul! thanks for ur words :)
ReplyDeleteThat is soo cute...! and romantic.. Love is like Wine.. the more it ages the more it tastes good..:)
ReplyDeletewelcome & thanks KP- nice example! :)
ReplyDeleteThis is such a sweet post! I loved it!
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting on my blog! :)
welcome! :) thank you!
ReplyDeleteenjoyed this... :)
ReplyDeletewelcome back! ashok :) glad to know that you enjoyed it :)
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