EVERLASTING MOBILE!
Dynamic digits of ten;
SIM makes you run;
Teens sms for fun;
Keys wend with pun!
Calls make you giggle;
Vibrate mode to wriggle;
Out of range you waggle;
Meager makes thou struggle!
Though smaller in size
Connects & curtails the miles;
Capture whoever smiles,
& preserve it in your files!
Sleep safe inside the pocket;
Dangle & dance as ladies locket;
Get charged with single socket;
Spate as gimmick in a market!
Even child can give the verdict;
Here i am to just predict...
That
whole world will become your addict!
written by :Sowmya
on 1st Aug;2011
Note:wriggle-make short twist in body movement;waggle-rapid shaking;meager-scanty in amount balance;dangle-hang;gimmick-attractive device.
U know what!!!!!
ReplyDeleteIts "THE" poem...U must contact some mobile company....and make some gr888 lyrics for thm ;)
hahaha!! funny hemant... thanks for ur suggestion but none of the company need this poem they are purely monetary minded!
ReplyDeletehope u enjoyed it thanks for the comment :)
I agree with Hemant. What an idea, Sirji!
ReplyDeletehey hemant ...u are going popular with ideas saru voted for u :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Saru.....
ReplyDelete@Sowmya: Now you also need to agree ;)
short and sweet...liked the lucidity...
ReplyDeletegood stuff!!! :)
wow sowmya, I say this on record...you can write on anything girl...very very creative... :)
ReplyDelete@ hemant fine ...agreed! :)
ReplyDeletehai ambiguous insomnaic...thank you for dropping the words from ur heart ... :)
hello skywalker...thanks for recording ur motivational words in my blog! happy that you enjoyed it...:)
keep smiling always :)
Ha ha.. never read a poem on Mobile!! Good one..
ReplyDeleteooo.... poem on a mobile phone.., it's really nice and creative, and the way you write its great.. and yes i agree with your friend Hemant.. :P.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Hemant and Saru... A unique poem from a wonderful pen.. I have to say, If mobile can feel poems then it would love you for this sweet poem..
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
@sowmya: I have more votes.... :)
ReplyDeletehello sunil..yes i thought of taking a different concept so tried for mobile i think it worked out hope u enjoyed it thanks ....:)
ReplyDeleteohh my ....thanks himanshu for huge motivational words.all these types of boost will make me feel to write more & more thanks a lot ....:)
ReplyDeletehello someone spl...
ReplyDeleteseems i have to seek for a mobile company with all ur suggestion :)
thanks you for the adorable words :)
keep smiling always :)
@ hemant ..yes u got more votes :)finally won :D
ReplyDeletethis is what always happens...u win !!! :)
Nice one...!!! I loved your poem and specially the subject which you have chose.....
ReplyDeleteIts a simple device but it does wonders... :)
thanks dj & welcome to my blog ;happy that u enjoyed it :)
ReplyDeletegr888....loved it...i can see blackberries and iphones coming your way to thank for such a creativity...:P
ReplyDeleteA mobile phone is all you need!!
ReplyDeleteNice, fun poem. And I'm with Saru and Hemant as well :P :)
welcome ankit & risha..
ReplyDeletethanks for dropping from your heart :)
keep smiling always :)
This was really something outta the box, quite seldom anyone would have thought to write a poem on a mobile. Superb poem! Can't describe a mobile better than this ..
ReplyDeleteWelcome kokz :)
Deletethanks you for your encouraging words :)
Very true expression.. :) Good Harmony :)
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading it :)
One thing more to add
"One call is enough to give sleepless nights" :P
Loved it Sowmii :)
Welcome Akhil,
Deletewell i thought mobile will feel bad for that line :P anyways thanks for dropping by!