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Thursday 14 April 2011

*guess who opened my eyes



YOU ARE THE ONE; WHO OPENED MY EYES

Ho My Gush! I Am Thrown To A Sea;
It’s A Sea Of Hindrance; Made Me Helpless,

Which Was About To Ruin My Life; But,
You Are The One Who Kept Me Intact;

Hereabout I Just Felt Someone,
You Are The One Who; Made My Guts Won!!!!

Ho My Gush! Now I Am In A Thorny Meadow;
It’s A Thorns Of Troubles; Made Me Struggle,

Thought I Felt Tentative To Tell You;
But I Felt U; Some Where Here; So I Kept

In Search Of You Every Where……
Ho, No! I Found You No Where; Still

I Heard Your Voice Inside Me!!!
With A Contact; Hey! I Am Your ‘Conscience’

I Always Stoop For You Have
Opened My Eyes In Stormy Days…

Written By : Sowmya

Written On:13th Dec,2010

NOTE: intact-undamaged; tentative-hesitate; stoop-bend forward; contact-communication.
Posted by smiling soul at Thursday, April 14, 2011
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7 comments:

  1. HemantFriday, May 13, 2011 11:49:00 pm

    this is awesome yaar....keep writing :)

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  2. smiling soulSaturday, May 14, 2011 9:58:00 am

    thank hemant

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  3. AnonymousMonday, June 13, 2011 4:43:00 am

    Hi sowmya - Its true when I read this poem there is an underlying commonality with my poem Courage as you have correctly pointed out. Superb!

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  4. smiling soulMonday, June 13, 2011 4:39:00 pm

    thanks mr.sajeevkmemon for giving a glance..

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  5. priyaMonday, September 05, 2011 1:03:00 pm

    awesome sowmya!superb!

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  6. UnknownMonday, November 05, 2012 4:12:00 pm

    Something expressed :) in a soulful way :) Straight from heart :)

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  7. smiling soulMonday, November 05, 2012 4:32:00 pm

    welcome & thanks Akhil for dropping by!

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